{"id":80,"date":"2006-12-23T13:51:04","date_gmt":"2006-12-23T21:51:04","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.vopenhouse.ca\/blog\/80\/words-with-impact-writing-an-effective-real-estate-description\/"},"modified":"2007-11-14T14:50:47","modified_gmt":"2007-11-14T22:50:47","slug":"words-with-impact-writing-an-effective-real-estate-description","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.vopenhouse.ca\/blog\/80\/words-with-impact-writing-an-effective-real-estate-description\/","title":{"rendered":"Words With Impact &#8211; Writing An Effective Real Estate Description"},"content":{"rendered":"<p align=\"left\">Having read over thousands of real estate ads, it is obvious that some realtors make a greater effort at writing descriptions for their listings.  I often wondered how important a well-written description is to the potential buyer, especially with the rise of high-resolution images and video and virtual tours.  Do I need to be told that the kitchen has stainless steel appliances when I can see it in the pictures or video?  Well someone has just released a study on just this topic.  I read this on the CBC website this morning:<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p><em>Nothing deters a house-hunter like the terms &#8220;must-see&#8221; or &#8220;motivated seller,&#8221; suggests a new Canadian study on language and real estate.<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Paul Anglin, an economy professor at the University of Guelph, analyzed home sales in Windsor, Ont., over a four-year period.<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>&#8220;There is a basic question about how house prices are determined,&#8221; Anglin said. &#8220;I was building on earlier research that was looking into that question.&#8221;<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Anglin found that when realtors described houses as &#8220;beautiful&#8221; or &#8220;gorgeous&#8221; they sold 15 per cent faster and for as much as five per cent more than a comparable house. A house that was described as in &#8220;move-in condition&#8221; sold in 12 per cent less time, on average.<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>&#8220;I guess it makes sense that every house is beautiful to somebody,&#8221; Anglin said. &#8220;I&#8217;m surprised that that just attaching the label would make a difference.&#8221;<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Toronto realtor Ian Shaw said it&#8217;s important to accentuate the positive aspects of a house but said the adjectives must be accurate.<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>&#8220;If you say it the wrong way, you can actually turn people right off,&#8221; he said. &#8220;I think language is quite important.&#8221;<\/em><\/p>\n<p><em>Anglin found that when houses used descriptors including &#8220;as is&#8221; or &#8220;must see&#8221; or promised a &#8220;motivated seller,&#8221; the houses took longer to sell and often sold for less.<\/em><\/p>\n<p align=\"right\"><em><a href=\"http:\/\/www.cbc.ca\/consumer\/story\/2006\/12\/22\/real-estate.html\">http:\/\/www.cbc.ca\/consumer\/story\/2006\/12\/22\/real-estate.html<\/a><\/em><\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p align=\"left\">It seems that the description may be a cue or trigger to motivate the potential buyer to look for more information.  This leads to the question, if you already have had a video produced and it is linked to the mls website, how can you increase its number of views?  The mls website does not allow for any differentiation between &#8220;Virtual Tours&#8221;.  According to the mls, a virtual tour can be a gallery of images, a 360\/panoramic tour or a video.  It becomes very difficult to harness the demand for video when there is no way of determining the type of &#8220;Multimedia&#8221; that resides on the other side of the VIEW MULTIMEDIA link.  We always suggest to our clients that they write &#8220;VIDEO TOUR&#8221; in all descriptions.  I will also make it a point to suggest that a well written description with words that entice the Internet audience, will drive even more views of their video as well!<\/p>\n<p align=\"left\">\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Having read over thousands of real estate ads, it is obvious that some realtors make a greater effort at writing descriptions for their listings. I often wondered how important a well-written description is to the potential buyer, especially with the rise of high-resolution images and video and virtual tours. 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